"Kichuta mone rakhar jonne"

Manuscript of  "Untitled" story line for a stage play.
(open to ideas and disliking)
PS: Story is in Bengali,so the non-Bengali reader a big sorry.

Concept: Supratim De
Story: Intellectual Monk

Script (in progress) : Intellectual Monk

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Janla diye opolok chokhe takiye aachen atana babu.ekta phaka jaigar chardik ghire school.ar sei pahaka jaigatar dikei takiye aachen uni.ekhun birotir somayo noy je school er chelera mathe neme khela korbe ba chechamechi korbe.tao uni takiye aachen.ek drishtite jeno ekakittor songei soyie nicchen nijer chokh duto ke.chosmar frame ta namiye jamar hata diye chokh ta ektu muche nilen.jodi keu dekhe phele.
Atanu babu,mane ei school er headmaster.school-er naam xyz sriti memorial school.na bhul bollam,uni ajker por ar headmaster thakben na.Table-e pore thaka envelope ta tule nilen hate.Offer letter eseche ekta notun global school er torof theke.kono kheyal bosei bodhay mashkhanek age paper e ad dekhte peye,ekta mail korechilen.mail korar somay bhabtei parenni je onar moton probin kono sikkhok ke ekta nami notun school dakte pare.hotathi ekdin phone peye chomkei uthechilen.kheyal o chilona.asole etotai casually pathiyechilen.phone e kotha holo.ei elakai onake beshirbhag manush I chenen.tai chakri ta je hoye jabe seta uni na bhableo,oi elakar je kono manush seta chokh bondho kore bole dite parto.
Kintu haye adrishto,Atanu babu kauke boltei to parenni.Kibhabei ba bolben.ha eta thik ei chakri jiboner sesher dike ese jodi ek dhakkai remunaration pray 15 hazar bere jaye ta mondo konobhabei na.kintu etao to thik je taka diye sob kichur bichar hoyna.Ki bolbe sobai jodi jante pare.je school suru hoyechilo matro duto ghor diye setake je sarajibon til til kore gore tullo aj sei ei school chere chole jabe matro kota takar jonne.Mone mone bhablen,hoyto sudhu sudhui nijer mone kharap lagche.ekhunkar juge sobai to khub besi practical.khub professional.tai sentiment er to jaiga sonkulan I kora jayna jiboner moddhe.nijer monei jeno ektu hese uthlen.Uni nijeke jotota school er songe ekagro kore bhaben hoyto onnoder chokhe ta formality.Nah! olpo koyekta din tarpor keu take moneo rakhbena.durbar gotite sobai doure cholbe ar rasta dhoya jol kichu sriti ar kichu soda gondho songe kore nalai jome thakbe.

Acccha ke ki bhablo to onek porer kotha.Uni nijer parben ei bhalobasar theke dure thakte.Bhalobasai to bote.diner por din nijer hate ekta ekta ghmaer phota phele toiri korechen ei school.primary theke ekhun higher secondary.ekdin-e to hoyni.diner por din nijer bhalobasa ke aro ektu guchiye niyechen nijer mone aro sundor kore sajiyechen thik nijer moner moto kore.chosamata mathar opor tule ekta dwirgho niswas charlen Atana babu.Offer letter ta enveloper moddhe dhukiye samner table paper weight er chape rakhlen.tar pasei pore aache letterpad.aj sokalei uni setai nijer resignation letter ta likhe pathiyechen governing body-r kache ar ek copy geche Teacher’s room e.ar kichukkhun er moddhei sobai jante pere jabe.tobe sesh kichudin dhorei uni abe bhabe bujhiyechen je uni onno chakrite jete paren.khanikta nijekei hoyto bar bar janan diyechen ar nijer monei nijeke bojhate cheyechen.

Nah,boddo deri hoye jacche,er por student colleague ra jante parle abar farewell janate asbe,tar agei borong dorkari kagoj gulo guchiye phela jak.table e rakha glass theke ektu jol kheye nilen.golata boro sukno lagchilo onar.bodhay chinta guloi boro sushko kore tulche montake.chair-er thik pechonei onar cubboard ta.chair theke uthe dariye drawer theke chabi ta tule nilen atanu babu.ek jhotkai khule phellen cupboard er duto palla.sobtheke uporer takh tai file er tara gulo thasa.tar moddhei bhagabhagi kore tola aache official onek kagoj.sundor kore sothik file e guchiye rakhar bodobbhesh ta boro subidhe jonok kaajer khetre.school e kono notun teacher aslei ei kothata bolten uni.’boi khata guchiye rakhar mormo sei to sothik bhabe sekhate pare je nije ei bepare jotnosil.’ bolten uni.
Ekdom nicher tak-e onek gulo chalk er aral theke ki jeno ekta uki marche.nichu hoye jhule dekhte giye dekhlen ekta kana bhanga scale.setar ulto pithe koto jeno hitibiji lekha.naam o lekha ache tate.subhasish er.subhasish ekhun koto boro hoye gelo dkehte dkehte,ar sei chelei naki age chilo bhari chothphote.ekphota jodi keu take classroom e bosate pare.Thik mone aschena atanu babur.ekdin bodhay onar office e deke pathiye onek kichu bujhiyechilen.tar por theke subhaish jodi konodin kono dustumi korto,se nijei ei scale ta sir er kache diye bolto “boke din sir,boka khete khete ami thik ekdin sikhe jabo”.bondhuder thattar shikar hoye se nijei scale er ulto pith e likhechilo “ami ekta gadha”.atana babu nijer monei hese phellen.ekhun subhasish nijei ekjon teacher.eito last year ei bodhay chakrita pelo.
Chokher kone ekduphota sriti uki dicche jeno.chokhta jhapsa hoye asche onar.hatrate laglen.ha ekhanei to chilo sei duto album ar ekta boro envelope e bhora ekgada chobi.bibhinno onushthane tola chobi gulo.kokhuno borshoboron ba kokhuno teacher’s day,annual day koto rokom chobi.ekta ekta chobi ar onek gulo sritir megh jeno tader songe keu sete rekhechilo.boro alga hoye geche chobi gulo.nijer monei koto rokom sriti jeno uki diye jacche onake.prottek bochor sitkale picnic ba oi je rabindrajayanti.ekta chobi hate niye thomke gelen tini.flag waisting er chobi.koto juddhoi na korte hoto sob student der joro korar jonne.emono to din geche,barite giye deke deke ghum theke tule ante hoyeche sob chatroder.ar seibar.nah por por dubar khub bristi august mashe.tai onar baritei ager dinta roye giyechilo koyekjon.boyesh-er parthokko jotoi thakuk,nijer cheleder motoi to dekhen sob chatroder.sei dingulo keno khub taratari phuriye gelo.
Accha sei chobita kothai gelo.Dipto sir er chobir opor kon ek student sketch pen diye …..hese phellen atana babu.student-der uni jotoi bokajhoka kore discipline sekhan,nijer collegue der ei sob bisoy niye pechone lagte kokhunoi pichpa honni uni.asole headmaster holeo kono tofat korten na nijer sathe onnoder.tai bhalobasao to one peyechen.kokhuno obhiman kokhun raag sobi to mile mise aache ei chotto chotto khungsuti gulor songe.
Hotath jeno ghor kete gelo atanu babur.pechone ghure dekhlen dariye aache ramdas.bohu bochor hoye gelo office-er clerical kaaj gulo samlacche ramdas.koto bochorer sathi ei ramdas.eka ki ar sob kaaj kora jaye.biswas er to ekta bepar ache naki! Atanu babur joto bhabna joto kheyal sob kichu sathi ei ramdas.”sir ki korchen?hotath eto oborjona ghatchen keno?kichu ki hariye geche?ami dekhe debo sir kichu khujle bolun. Sir asfute bole othen jeta harie geche seta je samay re.. se je harie gele take fire pawoa jai na tar smriti tukui kei anuvab kora jai…bodle jawoa samay ar kota taka ei anuvutita kei kine nilo??? Chapa dirghoswas e joriye jaye golata.bujhli ramdas eta aborjona noi re eguloo jeno ak akta smriti…ja mone porie dichhe aka akta smaay ke…e jeno harie jawoa samayer smritir canvas.

hotath egulo ghatchen sir??ramdas jiggesh kore.
Kichu bolenna atanu babu.sudhu arekbar phire takan rmadas er dike..mridu hese sudhu bolen…ki kore baishta(22) bochor kete gelo bolto?

Kotoi na sriti bhir kore ase atana babur mone.ghorer bhetor ta boro dombondho hoye asche onar.Ramdas er kothai ghor ta kete gelo.’sir,sob teacher ra asbe apnar songe dekha korte break er somay.’
Ar student der janano hoyeche ki? Jante chailen atatna babu.
Ha,sir,sob class ei janano hoyeche,senior duto class aj class bondho rakhar request korechilo,bodhay apnar jonno kono farewell arrange korbe,class teacher ra permission diye diyechen to ektu agei.Senior student ra aslo bole.Kothata sune atanu babu jeno ektu bhoy-I pelen.ki bolben chatroder.ei porishthitir I bhoy korchilen uni.nijeke boro besi oporadhi mone hocche.nijer moner obostha tata jeno nijei thahor kore utte parchen na.

Asbo sir!
Cokh tule takiye dekhben ek dol chatro dariye aache room er baire.koyek muhurto kichu bolte parlen na uni….ek ek kore sobar mukh gulor opor ekbar chokh buliye nilen uni.class 12 er student.sobaikei naam dhore chenen.kothtata bollo class monitor sandip.
Ha eso.abege golata buje aslo atana babur.
‘sir amra sunlam apni ajker por school chere chole jacchen.amra to apnake khub miss korbo.kintu apni jate amader ekdom bhule na jan tar jonne ekta chotto jinish apnar jonno.’ Kothata bole sandip ekta Compact Disk egiye dilo sir er hate. ‘amader khub icche Jodi apni ekbar ei cd ta chaliye dekhen ekkhunie.’
Atatna babu sudhu mathata narlen.ekdom tolar desk ta khule ber kore nilen laptop er bag ta.ei ager bochorei ekta duto laptop deya hoyechilo school gulote.school er clerical kaajer jonno ekta bebohar hoy arekta onar kachei thake.khub ekta bebohar kora hoyna.computer janen jodio tao ektu sonkoch I bodh koren computer bebohar korte.laptop ta ber kore chaliye dilen uni.
Sir apni borong dekhte thakun,ami oi dikta ektu dekhe asi,ramdas ei kotha bole hon honiye beriye gelo dorja diye.Atatna babur thiki bujhte parlen kaaja chaptei ramdas ojuhat niye beriye gelo ghor theke.kintu onar sei subidhe nei….subidhe na hoyto ba iccheo nei nijer chatroder mon ta bhenge dewar.kanna onaro asche kintu seta chepe thakar jonnie besi kotha bolte parchen na.Cd ta dhukiye chaliye dilen uni.ekta rabindra snageet er songe songe cholte laglo kichu puro chobir anagona screen tar moddhe……aste aste sob chatro ghor theke beriye alto kore dorja ta bhejiye dilo ar sir dkehte thaklen sriti bhor aonek muhurter collage.
Cd ta dekhte dkhte bujhtei parenni kotota somay laglo…..moner moddhe megh ta jeno nijer ojantei onek kete geche…besh halka lagche nijeke.Nijer mone haste hastei egiye gelen dorkar dike.
Ki holo.dorja ta ki keu baire theke atke diyeche?nah ektu jore tantei khule gelo.asole dorjar niche ekta boro envelope guje rkahar jonne dorja ta atke giechilo.jhuke pore envelope ta tule nilen uni ar dorjata abar bondho kore dilen..ekta photo frame,ar tar moddhe je chobita sobha pacche seta ekta batch photo,kodin ageri newa.senior batch er songe onar chobi.onake ghire dariye acche sobai….ar chobir niche lekha “Bandhon hin bandhne bedhe rakhinu tomare”.
Arekta ki jeno aache kham tar moddhe…hat dhukiye ber kore nilen atana babu. Osotorko bhabe chera notebook er patai lekha « … otoi soja amder chere jawoa sir?? »
Etokkhun bodhay mone money sudhu hesechen,ebar besh bujhte parlen nijer chowal duto pran khule hasite joriye porlo.ebar sottie ojhore kede phellen uni.na bodhay dukkher noy anonderi.nijeke somay ar bhalobasar chaknite onekta jatai kore nite perechen uni…..nijer bhalobasar kache nijei joyi aaj.

Charidiker prithibita ghurte laglo nijer moner moddhe kane aste laglo koto kotha,koto sobdo,koto onubhuti,chokher smane bhese utute laglo bhobissoter koyek phota jibon.sunte pelen sobai jeno take bolche “ Sir Sarodutsab paln ta ki hobe”, »sir class korte parini attendance, » sir book kobe deben?? « Sir eta bujte aprchi na, “sir apni ato ragi keno.” Sir apnake dekhalm…….

Chinta gulo jhere phele cupboard ta bondho kore dilen.laptop ta bhore rakhlen drawer er moddhe ar tar songe cupboard er chabi tao.aste aste egote laglen dorjatar dike….onnodiner cheyeo jeno aaj dorja ta bhari lagche onar.ghorer light ta off kore den uni.ek jhotkai charidik ta ondhokar hoy ease.

Kintu kothay aache na,rather tara dekhte hole akash ke to ektu ondhokar hotei hoy.
Dorjar hatole hat diyeo phiriye nilen atana babu.kapa hate dorja ta chere dariye roilen kicchukhun.
Hatratei peye gelen switch board ta.switch er opor angulta chowatei alota jole uthlo abar ghorer.nah ar ondhokar nei.sotti ar kono asonka nei.uni nijer monk e bujhte perechen.

Table er kache giye chair ta tene niye bose porlen.Trouser-er pocket theke mobile phone ta ber kore nilen.ar shirt er pocket theke ber kore nilen tar appointment letter ta.
Chithi ta ar khulte holona.envelope-er oporei lekha aache global school er phone number ta.mobile e number ta type korte laglen.mone mone bhablen,sesh porjonto taka diye tar bhalobasa kena gelo na…kota taka kibhabei tar eto diner asa akankha ar porisrom er dam ditto.phone ta opor dike beje beje uthche.sokto kore mobile phone ta chepe dhorlen nijer kaner songe.

DORJAR BAIRE ETOKKHUN OPEKKHA KORCHILO BESH KICHU STUDENT.TADER SONGE JOG DIYECHE KICHU TEACHER-O.KAN PETE SONAR CHESTA KORCHILO KICHU CHOTHPHOTE CHATRORA.EKJONER KANE ELO SIR GHORER BHETORE BOSE KI JENO BOLCHEN.   HA BODHAY PHONE-EI KOTHA BOLCHEN.
“HA AMI KI SRI ACADEMY GLOBAL SCHOOL ER PRINCIPLE ER SONGE KOTHA BOLCHI! NA AMI APNADER APPOINTMENT ACCEPT KORTE PARCHI NA….AMI DUKKHITO”
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